my song for Liam

[Rita]

Alright, I wrote and recorded this song a while ago, after seeing The Courteeners in Paredes de Coura, and I thought I'd post it as an entry to the DVD competition
It's nothing really serious, it's home made, and the quality is not great but it's what I could do...
Any feedback would be appreciated!

Here's the link to the song + the lyrics:
www.mediafire.com/?oee1mur2hfp3sx9

Cheers!

[spiralxstatic]

that is pretty brilliant. you can sing! it reminds me of yesterday,today and its a little bit of a fan gush but well done for putting it up. the sound quality is very good on there too.

I love you too

I'm sitting here waiting for nobody,
and nobody ever comes.
I'm wishing to touch you for one more time,
but time just seems to run
too fast, and you, you come but you can never last
in one place for more than two days...
You must do it all again.
And yet, I don't see how I can ever let
myself believe in such things...
I'm the queen of pretend!

Remember me when you walked off stage?
I was the one who kept calling your name.
You turned around, like a ghost from divine,
Your soul seemed soaked in sweat and litters of wine!
And all of the sudden it seemed to me,
I wasn't just a faceless spot in a big screen
When you looked at me, you gave me the world,
when you held my hand it was the whole universe.

So do you mind if I pay you in the same coin?
Return like for like, and tell you through this song,
that I did believe it when you looked into my eyes,
and said "I love you too"...
Was that the right thing to do?

I know there is probably not much that I can do
that you haven't already done
with whoever's label was sticked upon your look,
and you did look just fine.
But still, God knows if you and I ever will
give a chance to a hopeless romance...
that only I dare to dream.
I guess, I can say what would go through your head,
if somehow you'd hear these few words
"she's the queen of pretend"

So do you mind if I pay you in the same coin?
Return like for like, and tell you through this song,
that I did believe it when you looked into my eyes,
and said "I love you too"...

And it's a risk that I'm taking,

[Rita]

thanks! It's obviously dramatized but I really just did it for fun and I have a laugh when I listen to it now lol
but thanks very much for listening

[spiralxstatic]

it could quite easily be about any one on a stage, and if you take it like that, then its a little gem really.

[Rita]

Cheers That's what I thought as well... At first I was a bit embarrassed because it's a bit cheesy lol, but if you forget it's about one particular person then it's not that bad...

[heylyla]

I enjoyed, well done

[bamber]

good effort that

[Rita]

cheers!