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Post by Exo-Happiness on Oct 19, 2009 22:25:25 GMT
Don'task!!!!!! That is amazing. Definitely one of your best. Good old Muse inspirations!  It really really is good! Ahh. It's made me want to write something now. Despite deciding I wouldn't. I think I might.  And thanks. I hate it. Bad bad timess... |
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Post by dontask on Oct 19, 2009 22:32:31 GMT
Don'task!!!!!! That is amazing. Definitely one of your best. Good old Muse inspirations! It really really is good! Ahh. It's made me want to write something now. Despite deciding I wouldn't. I think I might. And thanks. I hate it. Bad bad timess... yeah its like exogenesis but more extreme . thanks alot. |
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Oct 19, 2009 22:47:03 GMT
Dedicated to Luke...
I have a friend called Lorna.
And she is very kind.
I have no doubt that she would
Help someone in need who was blind
she says that I am nicer.
But this is a battle I can win
For my dearest Lorna
is the nicesest person's niceness twin
She told me once she stood on a baby
The baby was her sister
but It doesn't matter because she's not heavy
and the hammer she had missed her
She once invited me to a party
a party in her womb
I'd invite you all along too
but she has ovaries of doom.
This stupid and 'pointless' poem
was stolen from a rapstaa battle
but don't tell lorna what I've done
or she'll merk me with her cattle.
Over and Out.
a
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Post by dontask on Oct 19, 2009 22:49:58 GMT
lmao you could have dedicated anything to me but you pick that xD
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Oct 19, 2009 22:51:09 GMT
It was purely because you wanted me to post!
Also. You need to read the full Rapstaa Battle!
It gave us many drunken hours of amusement!
I'll link you on fb.
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Post by dontask on Oct 19, 2009 22:59:17 GMT
just did well funny. DONT SHOW IT ANT! |
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Oct 19, 2009 23:08:51 GMT
He'd probably find it immature and pointless.  But I think there are some proper good lines in there! 'Then I put a pillow over her face and threw her in the bin' 'The nicesest person in the world's niceness twin' 'Your tub or mine?' Haha. lorna's great.. |
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Post by dontask on Oct 19, 2009 23:14:55 GMT
seems quite funny yeah and dont worry wont tell her. dont want you to get merked by cattle... ;D
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Oct 20, 2009 12:34:10 GMT
I think that poem brought me luck! I got a conditional offer for a Zoology course at Bangor uni! I'm so happy. I'm not going to accept it... Haha. but still. SO SO happy! |
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Post by dontask on Oct 20, 2009 13:53:28 GMT
well done |
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Oct 22, 2009 0:17:56 GMT
Sea blue
sky green
depth of curiosity.
He continues to walk
the water reaching his waist
his elbows
his neck
his eyeline.
all that can be seen
is the peak of his cap.
as this as the water is
it still manages to reach breath from within.
such is the line between love and hatred.
once crossed, does it become too much to bear?
To be insulted or abused
is more than enough for someone to take.
but to be hated tops them all.
hatred is the pinaccle of all emotions.
It's too much.
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Oct 22, 2009 0:21:06 GMT
Actually... Scrap that. It's shit. haha
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Post by dontask on Oct 22, 2009 13:05:19 GMT
its definitely not shit! dont love it as much as your others but its still good
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Oct 22, 2009 13:14:26 GMT
nope. Still hate it. I was too tired.
Note to self - don't write when tired.
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Post by dontask on Oct 22, 2009 13:58:17 GMT
dont write when wasted. unless you feel like proof reading in the morning.
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