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Post by spiralxstatic on Dec 16, 2010 11:46:18 GMT
it sounds cliché but youre just going through the phases, you'll start to blame her instead of yourself for a while and eventually you'll just move on. you speed it up by meeting new people so make sure you get out.
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Post by Pete on Dec 16, 2010 15:00:49 GMT
You need to read High Fidelity, Darren
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Post by spiralxstatic on Dec 17, 2010 16:35:57 GMT
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Post by Darren on Dec 18, 2010 13:22:19 GMT
Made me  |
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Post by spiralxstatic on Dec 18, 2010 21:03:31 GMT
in a good way, i hope.
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Post by Darren on Dec 20, 2010 18:04:40 GMT
Yeah, it makes you think about things differently  |
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Post by Rita on Dec 20, 2010 18:14:53 GMT
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Post by spiralxstatic on Dec 20, 2010 18:31:35 GMT
I like Noel singing that. but. Machines still owns it  also, I need to write more. |
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Post by theatrics on Dec 20, 2010 19:11:14 GMT
I haven't been on in a while, I found it hard to write- I guess I wasn't upset  You seem so far away Sat there without me. But I do not want you back After treating me so terribly. This is the first time I have truly admitted To myself You’re such a b*st*rd. I cannot think of anything good That came out of us I was simply misunderstood. And do not pretend to show you care, Under affectionate eyes your callousness shines through. It doesn’t suit you sweetheart, love never did. But I would have loved you Forever. If you’d of asked me to. You always wanted me close to you But far enough, yes far enough For that elbow of yours, that wall That keeps you standing so tall. I wonder when someone will kick it in. I have no doubt I will see you on my doorstep. Alone with your thoughts, If only you shared. You would have realised I hate me Just as much as you hate You. |
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Post by spiralxstatic on Dec 20, 2010 19:37:25 GMT
well , you definitely dont sound upset.
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Post by theatrics on Dec 20, 2010 22:17:35 GMT
haha, It's more anger recently.
You seem mad at me Spiral, I'm sorry?
Very short critique?
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Post by spiralxstatic on Dec 21, 2010 2:13:40 GMT
haha, It's more anger recently. You seem mad at me Spiral, I'm sorry? Very short critique? im not mad at you, sorry. just been a couple of bad days. it will be channelled back into here im sure. |
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Post by Darren on Dec 21, 2010 21:09:58 GMT
Seems like everyone is writing about failed relationships??
I think I'm getting more positive but still finding it hard, so I had to get it out again!
I'm starting to feel the changes or it hasn't sunk in yet
A long way to go but at least I'm crawling
Is that debris laying in my path?
No, it's the shattered past I'm struggling to get through
I need to let go...
Holding on for someone that doesn't want you
Let her go
Thinking about the memories that once made us happy
Let them go
Holding on to the time we shared together
Let it pass
Reading the texts before it ended
Delete them
Thoughts about her with another makes me feel sick
It's going to happen
Starting all over again is a scary thought
Like I always felt on the first day at all the schools
or that first day at college
All on my own again
a bit different now because I'm older
More wiser?
Keep thinking what I should do and where should I go
Starting a fresh should be an exciting feeling
it is in a strange way
New challenges, prospects and goals
I need to make new friends and meet someone else?
Life will change for the better not worse
I'm the only thing standing in the way
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Post by spiralxstatic on Dec 21, 2010 21:19:36 GMT
a much nicer read Darren, I'm glad youre starting to see the light.
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Post by theatrics on Dec 21, 2010 21:52:21 GMT
I'm sorry to hear about that Spiral, I thought you seemed very short with your reply.
It may make for better writing though.
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