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Post by sirmavers on Nov 1, 2009 16:48:52 GMT
I speak like that to some people though, but only people who know me well enough to know I'm not a complete maniac. When you get to know someone though, it works in layers, if I spoke like this to someone who I didn't know then no layers would build and they would just walk through me. But my mates have layers of trust for me, so when I speak crap there are still layers of knowingness, and that. Whatever, I'm off again. But no I'm not always like this, just when I think  |
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Post by dontask on Nov 1, 2009 17:02:05 GMT
this isnt mine but i wanted to write something like it and failed. enjoy.
Wake... from your sleep
The drying of your tears
Today.. we escape
We escape.
Pack and get dressed
Before your father hears us
Before.. all hell.. breaks loose.
Breathe... keep breathing
Don't lose.. your nerve.
Breathe... keep breathing
I can't do this.. alone.
Sing us a song
A song to keep us warm
There's such a chill
Such a chill.
You can laugh
A spineless laugh
We hope that your rules and wisdom choke you
Now we are one
In everlasting peace
We hope that you choke...
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Nov 2, 2009 16:51:22 GMT
Who wrote that? It's good. And I recognise it. But I don't think I know it.
Also. I'm going to pm you, Luke, about Laura Marling....
OH. MY. GOD.!
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Post by dontask on Nov 2, 2009 18:56:03 GMT
its exit music by radiohead and pm away  |
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Nov 2, 2009 19:03:48 GMT
I thought I recognised it!!! Oh yeah.. I forgot about the pm! haha. |
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Post by dontask on Nov 2, 2009 19:23:29 GMT
well it doesnt matter now youve put lies all over my page.
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Nov 2, 2009 22:12:34 GMT
Lies? Me?
Never...
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Post by dontask on Nov 2, 2009 22:20:39 GMT
catch a lie in your hand
try and keep it there
you'll find its like remembering
an uninterupted dream
you can fight all you like
but all the knowledge
eventually slips through
the cracks
the memories used to be so sweet,
harness the truth to get back on your feet.
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Nov 2, 2009 22:23:27 GMT
*claps*
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Post by dontask on Nov 2, 2009 22:24:55 GMT
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Nov 2, 2009 22:30:43 GMT
On the horizon,
The clouds loom like a lost city.
I want to walk its streets.
My arm throbs
With a painful reminder of my relief
Whilst voices resound angrily below.
The window is inviting me,
But I resist.
This is one temptation I know I can ignore.
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Post by dontask on Nov 2, 2009 22:38:35 GMT
see now this i dont get but i love the imagery. |
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Nov 2, 2009 22:39:19 GMT
Haha. In this one, I'm glad you don't No offence. haha. x |
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Post by sirmavers on Nov 2, 2009 22:43:31 GMT
Actually, though I am usually lost when I read your stuff. I can kind of get that Alice  Not sure why, think I did something similair once. Resisting the temptation. Very good imagery. |
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Nov 2, 2009 22:45:47 GMT
I truly hope you didn't... But thanks. It's not a nice poem. :/ |
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Not sure why, think I did something similair once. Resisting the temptation. Very good imagery.