THE ARCHIVE

[Sean]

Oh it was for the competition, about two faced people

[sirmavers]

Then if it's for the comp just PM it to me mate, cheers.

I can feel how much you are crining from that first poem mate, I hate doing stuf like that and I hope I never have to.

Second one, alright cheers

[Sean]

I did in the first couple of days of August

[dontask]

it was a success though suppose its worth it...

[Exo-Happiness]

I'm struggling with my poem... It's not good

I was writing limericks about my friends today!!
This forum has got me all poetic again. haha

[Exo-Happiness]

I sit cross legged in my shower.
Fully clothed.
There are some things best left unseen.
I telepathically send mandatory
Requests
To the beads of water
Do not touch my skin.

I find myself writing
Over the words of a robot.
Words which are false.
Vandalising,
I am not.
Correcting?

The silence of bombs meets my ears.
I think of guns
And tattoos.
And as I write my
Thoughts
Over these words that I have not read,
The reality hits.

The silence
Is far more destructive
Than any of the weapons
That create it.
Or the words which describe it.

[Exo-Happiness]

Old Light.

They freckle the skies
Forming random shapes and images.
History of the past
And present
Is held within their shine.
Victims to their beauty,
All that lies beneath is inferior.
Worthless.
Yet they continue to trick and amaze
With their predictions
Of weathering events.
They are keyholes through the years.
Yet they are just old light.

[Sean]

Oasis.

They lasted until now despite,
The sibling based fights,
They made some classic songs,
No-one can deny,
If only Liam wasn't such an explosive guy,
Hopefully they will be back one day,
Us fans will at least hope and pray.

Cheesy, took me 30 seconds, crap but hey.

[sirmavers]

I’ve found the will to live,
Handed over through a line of messiahs,
The feelings hit me and I know it’s time,
I’m going to make life and take people higher,
Worried for doctors,
I was shivering cold,
Falling from a cliff,
No hands there to hold,
All appointments cancelled,
I was told that I am cured,
Adrenaline rushing through every vain,
I don’t feel the need to be adored,
Mother told me I was kissed by an angel,
Despite my educational faults,
Bring the needy to a thought provoking hour,
And bring the whole world to a halt,
People are born of sound,
Words running through their brains,
I am one of these chosen few,
I’ve again the right to feel sane,
No ledge will ever be so easy to fall from,
Glad I thought twice about it whilst I could,
It dawned on me this sleepless night,
That I’ve magic in my blood,
The man himself picked the right time to kneel,
He knew it was someone else’s chance to whisper words,
Penning meaningless dross until this very day,
Joy now drowns me in its marching herds,
So much more to say from here,
This message is just the start,
I’ll bring together every lover in their full,
And pull every war apart,
In the eye of my own mind,
And soon to be in the eyes on you all,
I’ll take you up to a higher place,
And unlike others I’ll never let you fall.

[dontask]

this is a song, not a poem, i think its a little underwhelming as just lyrics but here goes:

Are we, happy with what we’ve done?
Cant we, see what we have become?

Wish we, could f*ck it all and leave.
Should we, open our eyes and believe.

There’s no way back.
There’s no way back.

We need to,
Open our eyes, our we proud of ourselves?
Our we proud of ourselves?
Our we proud of what we’ve done.

We need to,
Open our eyes, our we proud of ourselves?
Our we proud of ourselves?
Our we proud of what we’ve done.

[Sean]

If I thought it was possible I would have exercised the notion,
It will never happen however much you might wish,
I never did though so why does your mind wander,
To the fact it could because let me tell you she never would,
You aren't her type,
I was but I had enough of it,
It made me think the path to the end was always well lit.

You've got nothing on me,
Nothing that I ever released for you,
For you.

You may as well give up,
There's no hope,
for you for you for you.

The state that your conscience let you fall in is terrible,
I think the reason you let it happen is a result of me,
That's not my ego talking despite your feeling,
Why does you voice now sing like you think your the fucking king?,
You've got no chance,
What made you think you had?,
You've tried so hard to get one now a second that is sad.

You've got nothing on me,
Nothing that I ever released for you,
For you.

You may as well give up,
There's no hope,
for you for you for you.

Why did you catch me when I didn't fall,
You try and patronise my feelings when I really never asked,
Why? Why did you try?
Don't get me wrong you'll never sing another song,
You had the best you could get and you'll be falling since this,
Downhill you will go and that is what you know.

There's no hope, no hope, no hope, no hope for you.

I think songs are always underwhelming without the music to be honest, it's hard because some might be immense with music but crap as just lyrics.

[dontask]

well im lookin for a band right now so maybe you will hear some actual songs at some point.

[dontask]

exohappiness i am loving your latest two, like a breath of fresh unhappy air.

[dontask]

oasis?
the sound of piss,
hitting water,
and the ramblings of a snorter.

the roses?
a lil bit overrated,
much more like posies,
any effect of me; negated.

kings of leon?
sold themselves,
sure they aint neon,
but just want records off the shelves.

blur?
intelligence of a gorilla,
lacking the side projects creative flair,
and the albums sound all filler.

one last one for ant

the la's?
think theyre just for ant,
like the sound of crashing cars,
id rather listen to sycophant...

apologies

[sirmavers]

Yeah you do know that I hate you now Luke Crashing cars? Strange omparison, but that's for another thread, it's all just a laugh. We all used to you're slightly uuuum, different taste to ours.