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Post by sirmavers on Aug 26, 2009 22:00:00 GMT
Doesn't have to rhyme love, that was all a joke, just write away. Uuuuuuum, I've only got one suitable poem about the subject in hand, and it's quite close to me, used to have a few more but they got deleted I can't think how to hepl tbh, you surely won't want us to write a full poem for you will you. I'd love to give you one but really isn't any that are suitable other than the one I just quoted...
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Post by dontask on Aug 26, 2009 22:02:08 GMT
well do your best, i can always make alterations, i feel ashamed of myself doing this i really do. weve been together 18 months or so n were going to different universities next month but staying together to make a go of it, weve had troubled patch recently. n it has to be optimistic.
i couldnt feel worse if i burnt down a church i really couldnt
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Aug 26, 2009 22:02:14 GMT
Love is a colour A confused black A deceitful sound A heartless crack
Love is a memory The taste still there I long for its return But it’s too much to bear
You think you want it But I know thoughts lie After time it may appear Before a swift goodbye
It is so very rare For love in time to stay Keep your heart your own Don’t let it fall away.
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Post by sirmavers on Aug 26, 2009 22:03:22 GMT
Sorry, my awesomness does have limits Would love to write one for you but it wouldn't work, can only do things for myself. So so sorry mate edit: I like that exo, but is it not pessimistic
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Aug 26, 2009 22:03:37 GMT
Maybe not what you're looking for...
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Post by dontask on Aug 26, 2009 22:04:01 GMT
thats brilliant exo i really like it but i think ive decided to do my own even if it seems forced and cheesy. id be too ashamed of myself if i claimed another as mine.
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Post by Exo-Happiness on Aug 26, 2009 22:05:23 GMT
Yeah. I think that is the best idea. Poems are generally very personal! Gotta come from the heart and all that. Anyways... My battery light is blinking and I have to be up at 6am to go for a jog before college! Yay... I shall bid you goodnight, poets. Talk tomorrow probably xxx
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Post by dontask on Aug 26, 2009 22:06:46 GMT
night exo. you got msn ant?
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Post by sirmavers on Aug 26, 2009 22:07:26 GMT
Collage? August? I'm so happy I quit education. If the prick is blinking then it may be winking, take it as a compliment, they don't often get spared, put it on charge, until the blink turns to stare EDIT: Have not got MSN, not been on it for long long time. Just do FB chat man.
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Post by dontask on Aug 26, 2009 22:08:39 GMT
lmao brill ant, i like tht, earlier question though ^^^^^
edit: right get yourself on
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Post by sirmavers on Aug 26, 2009 22:12:30 GMT
Ancient stuff now, just felt the need to cancel out that nonsense I posted last page with something normal. I sem to remember this being written when I basically couldn't give up a dead chase:
I took a long walk, Down a long empty street, No passersby to pass me, No enemy to beat, I was fighting fire, With an age old burnt out flame, My passion running dry, My soul running from the blame, The signs were warning, Of the trouble that was cast ahead, But I followed my dead ambitions, My heart stayed alive instead, Now my foolish self, Is being dragged through the dirt that’s left, I’m begging to find consciousness, Screaming to my very last breath, I thought the angel would come, Drag me from the deepest hole, But still I’m crying through every hour, Weeping from the depths of my soul, I took a long ride, Down a dull depressing street, No passerby shared a hand, My enemy had me beat.
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Post by Sean on Aug 26, 2009 22:25:03 GMT
Haha I wrote one in about 5 minutes that's about 8 lines
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Post by sirmavers on Aug 26, 2009 22:26:16 GMT
I used to do loads of 8 line things, they are usally dead good. Get em up...
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Post by dontask on Aug 27, 2009 3:23:56 GMT
for amy.
Happy Birthday, I Love You.
It’s actually quite hard to write this poem, You see there’s someone inside and you don’t even know him, It know it sounds a little bit crazy, But with me and you he can be a little bit lazy, I could see only trouble when I looked to our future, I do not think the situation would suit you, But I know that when it comes to you and me, We will always be strong and now I can see, Yes we might have troubles, When we have a severe lack of snuggles, And there might be some danger, Of us meeting up with a stranger, But there’s always something better, Than some orange trend setter, And that something is you, You know we’ll make it through, These difficult times, See the purpose of these rhymes, Is to tell you how much you mean to me, When my words aint coming easily, You were there when I was sad, Even though I had treated you quite bad, You were there when I was unsure, And my minds state was poor, So when I went and slipped, And too much alcohol I sipped, You were there for me then, Always one hundred percent, I know that we’ll be together, I know that we have to weather, The storm that is coming, And we will be thinking of running, But I know that we won’t, We’ve got something most don’t, Our heads will be in a mess, But we’ll see that as a test, Another one you will get an A in, This is something I’ll always want to stay in, The future is going to be marred, With problems so hard, But with no end in sight, The future has never seemed so bright. For Us.
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Post by dontask on Aug 27, 2009 3:28:57 GMT
to follow up the disgusting chessyness. i thought id re-release something
this is for someone, he knows who.
This street is empty of my friends, And full of light, Even though its night, In the right frame of mind I know my life is good, But sometimes that seems out of sight.
The steady incline of the road feels like life, Always a little bit difficult, Only if it was life there would be holes, To trip me up, to make me falter, Slow. Turning Ahead
The road gets steeper, But there must be something, Its waiting at the top and I can feel it, I can hear it, The road I look upon isn’t empty, But equally friendless, Yet much more tempting. Jump. Fall. Bliss. IMMERSE YOURSELF IN LOVE - THOM YORKE.
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